Score: 7

"Pretty Good"

submission: Pico paranoid!

date: May 2, 2009

Short and sweet, but a bit predictable in the end.

Also, what is this "Newgrouds" site that you link to at the end :3

Score: 7

"Pretty sweet."

submission: Bellum Letale

date: March 15, 2009

My only thought was that at one point the sound went off sync and then just kept getting worse. Did you strem the sound or use the event setting?

Other than that, I thought it was nice. A little dark, but they were mostly silhouettes.

All I can say is you better pass the class :3

Score: 5

"Decent, but only that."

submission: Cursor Fx

date: March 12, 2009

The game is frustrating, simple, and all around eh.

The amount of control you have is frustrating, especially when it get to the point that your cursor is blowing up and covering the entire screen so that you can't dodge reds at all.

Then you get stuck in a loop for about 10 minutes because of that and you want to break shit because your tail doesn't go away fast enough.

And this isn't that "Oh you just aren't good" thing. I beat it. I MADE MYSELF DO IT.

Ultimately, about 15 minutes in, I got bored by that facts that I'm dodging red splotches and not hitting green ones, that the patterns were repeating, and that the gameplay was too frustrating and repetative.

I do applaud the use of AS3, and it only lagged a bit, but there needs to be a LOT of refinement of gameplay if you want to make anything like a series out of this.

Score: 6

"Okay"

submission: NG BBS Awards 2008

date: January 11, 2009

/coulda used some spice.

Clever yet simple animation, some other sound effects besides just music, some original art.

But, it's nice to see the award winners.

Oh, and you spelled "drama" wrong ;P

Score: 0

"You embedded a video?"

submission: TurboGrafx Villains

date: January 6, 2009

And that's it.

It doesn't even load.

Score: 0

"Short and Bad"

submission: Quick Madness

date: January 6, 2009

Cool. No plot, like 5 seconds long, and you didn't draw any of it yourself.

Score: 6

"I have to agree..."

submission: UmiChan: Maiko

date: January 5, 2009

The moving eith a mouse is frustrating, especially on a laptop.

I found that I would die when I hit level 8-10 because I'd try to upgrade my skill level and it wouldn't give me any time to, even if I had added some feeling to her gauge.

My advice would be try and work out a system for using the keys to fuck her while using the mouse to select positions and powerups and whatnot.

Just to make it a bit more fluid and a bit less pain in the ass :D

My only other complaint is that it gets a bit repetative, and I only got halfway through :\

Score: 8

"BEEEOWJA AND HIS CAAAAASHLE"

submission: Bowja From His Cashle

date: January 4, 2009

:D

It was on the same level as a Stamper parody.

For how long it probably took you, it was actually funny.

Score: 6

"Ehhhhh..."

submission: $00pah NiN10Doh!

date: January 3, 2009

Only okay. A lot of the jokes weren't very funny, and as questionably hot as the Pokemon Girls were, the Jokes are getting old and repetitive.

Some parts were well, done, like the pokemon girls (I can't deny that the art wasn't anatomically correct or animated well) and the StarFox parts (fluid and clean), but in general, for such a large collab (I shit myself a little when I realized it was over 20 MEGS :O), most of it was really bad. Especially LegendaryFrog's part.

For someone that has such a name for himself, a simple character over a white background... awesome. >:c That was sarcasm, btw.

Overall, I guess that the good parts were enough to carry the bad, but that doesn't really stop the score from being a little(very) inflated.

In the end, I'd probably give you guys something a little less than a 4, like a 3.97 or something. It's a good collab, but it's not this amazing collab like everyone's making it out to be.

Just don't tell me there's another one and we'll be fine.

Score: 3

"Really not that great..."

submission: Advanced Movie Maker

date: November 25, 2008

You've made an even worse medium for people to create shitty movies. And they can upload them. Well, at least it's not the real portal.

I don't have any general gripes with the coding. You obviously worked a good amount on the ACII, recording and save properties, allowing the load of sound, and you made a basic portal.

However, despite that it functions, it looks atrocious and is obstinate and difficult to use.

You should have spent more time on making it look like a presentable idea, versus having silly rectangles with normal gradients as every button possible.

While you deliver in the technical aspect and it works, you failed to deliver in the aestethic aspect, which is generally just as important. My advice would be spice it up. I can see the potential in it, even if it is truly unwarranted.

Do yourself a favor and learn Photoshop. Make some nice, quality buttons and details for it and don't leave things with just a "half-assed" feel to it... unless your name happens to be Egoraptor. In that case, everyone will suck your cock no matter what you make.

Overall, 3.5/5

Unfortunately, I run on a college scale, so it rounds down.