Not too bad, but...
As it's been pointed out, yeah, NG isn't the place for test runs.http://www.newgrounds.com/ngmag/
alphas/That would be where to sumbit something for crit. That, or go to the Reg Lounge in the Flash Forums. We'll give you fair crit.In general, it's not a bad movie (so far). I think Peach could be a *little* bit sexier, knowing how the actual video is, and the lip syncing is off (expected for a WIP).Even though it's decent, unless it's something like a 3/4 finished game for testing an online engine, WIPs and Betas are *supposed* to be on the main site. Just FFR